Pitch Feedback

After we pitched we got some positive and constructive criticism.

Our feedback was:

• A well thought out, and organised idea
• We have considered our promo package in detail
• Taken into account our star persona and what she is promoting 
• Liked the idea of cardboard cut outs and how it fits in with the surreal stop motion effect
• Liked the idea of Split screen 
• Creating a narrative that links with the lyrics - parallelism 
• Our narrative was slightly complex 
• Would be hard to represent a car crash 
• Stop motion is time consuming 
• An adventurous idea that could seem unachievable 

Ideas suggested to us were: 

• With our idea of split screen, we could show the characters passing objects to each other to show they are connected, but not physically together 
• The idea of using live motion, with the singer performing to break up the stop motion